川柳 · May

川柳
an erotic Haiku by Redbud

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her
dandelion-colored knees — my orgasm unexpectedly
········inside her

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Latest Comments

  1. paul1510 says:

    Will,
    insider her?
    It doesn’t spoil it.
    Paul.

    • willcrimson says:

      Yes,thanks Paul. Amazing how a writer can’t see these things in the heat of the moment. Proof that we see what we want and expect to see.

  2. vanillamom says:

    I saw it that when when it came to my email…and it made me smile, actually…phonetically it worked. … in a sweet, sensually overpowered kind of way…. :)

    nilla

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