“Wait- wait, s-STOP!”
She practically yanked me away by my hair.
“Mmwhat? Am I doing it wrong?”
“…No. GOD no. Holy fuck, it’s perfect. More than. I can’t – couldn’t stop coming!”
“Is that a bad thing?”
“Y-no. I don’t know. It was so… just… out of control. No one’s ever done that to me.”
“Wow. Well, excellent. Heh. I can still feel you sort of shuddering.”
“Y-yeah, aftershocks… I’ve only read about those until now.
“That’s good, right?”
“Hell yes. Are you kidding?”
“Not really, I’ve never done it before.”
“What?! You’ve never-?“
“Nope. Never…ah, well, never really had the opportunity.”
“How did you know… what to do?”
How do you say you’ve discovered eating pussy – her pussy – is the best thing in the world, and therefore what to do is obvious?
“…Sheer enthusiasm?”
“Ha!”
“Raw talent?”
“Uh, no argument there.”
“Beginner’s luck?
“Fuck I hope not.”
“Why not?”
“Because if that was a one-off I’m going to be frustrated for the rest of my life.”
“Then we should definitely test to verify…”
I moved my head back downward.
“Oh, fuck yesss. No, wait.”
“What?”
“What about you?”
“Me?”
“You need attention.”
“Um. I guess can’t say that I don- Woah!”
She twisted, rolling us until I was on my back.
“Yeah, see? Definitely in need. I have enthusiasm, too, you know.”
“You do-?”
“You’ll tell me if I have raw talent. Or luck.”
Her head lowered.
“Holy fuck.”
Categories: Erotic Fiction, Flash, Monocle, Oral Sex
The Erotic Writer 
LOL..Great!!! really I am still giggling :)
My wife has a smirk on her face ( I just read it out loud to her)
I love a couple that reads together.
Love this!
I remember going down on a girlfriend for what was her first time. I’ll never forget her reaction, a breathless “Oh my god…”
It’s comments such as this that need a “lick” button instead of a “like”.