“Wait- wait, s-STOP!”

She practically yanked me away by my hair.

“Mmwhat? Am I doing it wrong?”

“…No. GOD no. Holy fuck, it’s perfect. More than. I can’t – couldn’t stop coming!”

“Is that a bad thing?”

“Y-no. I don’t know. It was so… just… out of control. No one’s ever done that to me.”

“Wow. Well, excellent. Heh. I can still feel you sort of shuddering.”

“Y-yeah, aftershocks… I’ve only read about those until now.

“That’s good, right?”

“Hell yes. Are you kidding?”

“Not really, I’ve never done it before.”

“What?! You’ve never-?“

“Nope. Never…ah, well, never really had the opportunity.”

“How did you know… what to do?”

How do you say you’ve discovered eating pussy – her pussy – is the best thing in the world, and therefore what to do is obvious?

“…Sheer enthusiasm?”


“Raw talent?”

“Uh, no argument there.”

“Beginner’s luck?

“Fuck I hope not.”

“Why not?”

“Because if that was a one-off I’m going to be frustrated for the rest of my life.”

“Then we should definitely test to verify…”

I moved my head back downward.

“Oh, fuck yesss. No, wait.”


“What about you?”


“You need attention.”

“Um. I guess can’t say that I don- Woah!”

She twisted, rolling us until I was on my back.

“Yeah, see? Definitely in need. I have enthusiasm, too, you know.”

“You do-?”

“You’ll tell me if I have raw talent. Or luck.”

Her head lowered.

“Holy fuck.”

Categories: Erotic Fiction, Flash, Monocle, Oral SexTags: , , , ,


I am the little devil on your shoulder, stroking your neck with my tail, whispering obscenities into your ear, and looking down your blouse. One third of The Erotic Writer blog.


  1. Anonymous

    LOL..Great!!! really I am still giggling :)
    My wife has a smirk on her face ( I just read it out loud to her)

  2. ears20

    Love this!

    I remember going down on a girlfriend for what was her first time. I’ll never forget her reaction, a breathless “Oh my god…”

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