Enthusiasm/Talent/Luck

“Wait- wait, s-STOP!”

She practically yanked me away by my hair.

“Mmwhat? Am I doing it wrong?”

“…No. GOD no. Holy fuck, it’s perfect. More than. I can’t – couldn’t stop coming!”

“Is that a bad thing?”

“Y-no. I don’t know. It was so… just… out of control. No one’s ever done that to me.”

“Wow. Well, excellent. Heh. I can still feel you sort of shuddering.”

“Y-yeah, aftershocks… I’ve only read about those until now.

“That’s good, right?”

“Hell yes. Are you kidding?”

“Not really, I’ve never done it before.”

“What?! You’ve never-?“

“Nope. Never…ah, well, never really had the opportunity.”

“How did you know… what to do?”

How do you say you’ve discovered eating pussy – her pussy – is the best thing in the world, and therefore what to do is obvious?

“…Sheer enthusiasm?”

“Ha!”

“Raw talent?”

“Uh, no argument there.”

“Beginner’s luck?

“Fuck I hope not.”

“Why not?”

“Because if that was a one-off I’m going to be frustrated for the rest of my life.”

“Then we should definitely test to verify…”

I moved my head back downward.

“Oh, fuck yesss. No, wait.”

“What?”

“What about you?”

“Me?”

“You need attention.”

“Um. I guess can’t say that I don- Woah!”

She twisted, rolling us until I was on my back.

“Yeah, see? Definitely in need. I have enthusiasm, too, you know.”

“You do-?”

“You’ll tell me if I have raw talent. Or luck.”

Her head lowered.

“Holy fuck.”

Categories: Erotic Fiction, Flash, Monocle, Oral SexTags: , , , ,

Monocle

I am the little devil on your shoulder, stroking your neck with my tail, whispering obscenities into your ear, and looking down your blouse. One third of The Erotic Writer blog.

4 Comments

  1. Anonymous

    LOL..Great!!! really I am still giggling :)
    My wife has a smirk on her face ( I just read it out loud to her)

  2. ears20

    Love this!

    I remember going down on a girlfriend for what was her first time. I’ll never forget her reaction, a breathless “Oh my god…”

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