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川柳 · 333

What’s the difference between my mouth and cunt? she asks. She lies on her back, thighs still parted, hands on her breasts.
Who are you asking?
Your cock.
The lips of your cunt kiss my cock. When I slip between the lips, the mouth of your cunt licks the bulb from every direction; and when I thrust?—the throat of your cunt swallows and the lips of your cunt kiss my balls until they  quake and shudder. Your cunt is never satisfied until she has taken me from myself.
What about my mouth, she asks.
The lips  of your mouth aren’t like the lips of your cunt. They’re fuller, softer, and prefer persuasion. They whisper to my cock—little words that only my cock hears. When they guide my cock to your tongue, your tongue is clever and seductive. She is coquettish. She invites. coerces, and when she tastes semen, she is a cup. The mouth drinks her conquest.  Your cunt is my cock’s lover and soulmate. Your mouth is his mistress.

····side you—the whole of your body tonguing my
Redbud | January 27 2017

3 comments on “川柳 · 333

  1. stephaniesubmits
    January 28, 2017

    “…until she has taken me from myself.” What an incredibly beautiful line.

  2. Ena
    February 17, 2017

    Something you control and something you accept. I find the imagery powerful.

    • willcrimson
      February 17, 2017

      That’s—a really interesting comment Ena. Another way to think about the experience.

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