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川柳 · 323

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The red line out of Alewife—the subway squeals through the turns. Too long since I’ve seen her, too impatient to wait, I tell her what I’m going to do to her. I tell her everything: how, where, how hard it is to wait and how hard it will be for her when I no longer have to.
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parting
····her legs to keep her balance—kisses on the crowded
········train
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Redbud | January 17 2017

6 comments on “川柳 · 323

  1. Rock117
    January 17, 2017

    Been a long time, didn’t know you were around Boston?

    • willcrimson
      January 18, 2017

      So you’re familiar with that hard curve out of Alewife, eh? :) And yeah…

  2. vanillamom
    January 18, 2017

    One of my absolute favorites so far. ..this one gets the gold.

    Nilla

    • willcrimson
      January 18, 2017

      And true to life too… =)

  3. stephaniesubmits
    January 18, 2017

    “…how hard it will be for her when I no longer have to.” Oh. My. God. Can’t think of a clever comment. Just WOW.

    • willcrimson
      January 18, 2017

      I love everyone’s comments — just want to reiterate that. Thank you so much. It means so much to get feedback from readers — all of you. Nothing’s more depressing than writing into the void.

      :-)

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