川柳 · 323

·
The red line out of Alewife—the subway squeals through the turns. Too long since I’ve seen her, too impatient to wait, I tell her what I’m going to do to her. I tell her everything: how, where, how hard it is to wait and how hard it will be for her when I no longer have to.
·

parting
····her legs to keep her balance—kisses on the crowded
········train
·
·
Redbud | January 17 2017

Latest Comments

  1. Rock117 says:

    Been a long time, didn’t know you were around Boston?

  2. vanillamom says:

    One of my absolute favorites so far. ..this one gets the gold.

    Nilla

  3. stephaniesubmits says:

    “…how hard it will be for her when I no longer have to.” Oh. My. God. Can’t think of a clever comment. Just WOW.

    • willcrimson says:

      I love everyone’s comments — just want to reiterate that. Thank you so much. It means so much to get feedback from readers — all of you. Nothing’s more depressing than writing into the void.

      :-)

Share your thoughts.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s