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川柳 · 290

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She goes out into a mid-December morning, green-eyed and red-cheeked; fluidly through the icy wind.
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snow
····in her hair—hips warm with her lover’s
········orgasm
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Hips or womb, I don’t know which i should write. Warm with lovemaking, or her lover’s orgasm? Then how about this:

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snow
····in her hair—hips still warm with love-
········making

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Redbud | December 15 2016

2 comments on “川柳 · 290

  1. stephaniesubmits
    December 16, 2016

    Unsolicited opinion: I’d go with *lovemaking* on this one :)

    • willcrimson
      December 16, 2016

      Done. Now you have two versions to choose from. :)

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