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川柳 · 176


····date—telling him she only wears a dress and
Redbud | August 23 2016

8 comments on “川柳 · 176

  1. Nilla
    August 23, 2016

    Oh! This one grabbed me! What perfect imagery. Love it. .. that pause. The blink. The smile. Her little knowing grin. Geezuz Will! It’s a movie told in 11 words. Bravo.

  2. Anonymous
    August 23, 2016

    This is fascinating. Usually the sock is the murderer of desire. I’m sitting here imagining a person I find mouth watering, in socks. Sorry, can’t be done. He has become a normal garden variety man, in socks. Not mouthwatering at all.
    Perhaps it’s a guy thing?
    Or perhaps Nilla is right. It’s all in the timing.

    • willcrimson
      August 24, 2016

      I agree, Anonymous, a guy in socks and dress is kind of a buzzkill, though I probably wouldn’t call him garden variety.

    • willcrimson
      August 24, 2016

      Or Scottish, I should have written, but levity aside (because erotica is serious business) I could have written “dress and high heels” or “dress and a tattoo”. I like that latter one, as it implies that maybe he should go looking for it.

      ····date—telling him she only wears a dress and

      What I like about socks is exactly the reason you were kind’a like “Huh?”. Those “girls”, the ones that never figured out the whole CFM look, can be full of surprises. Sweet. Comfy in their buzzkill pajamas. And fun as hell in bed. The gal in the haiku. Maybe she’s wearing some clunky black glasses cuz’ she’s near-sighted and isn’t all that good with makeup but, you know, she’s trying.

      ····date—telling him she only wears a dress and

      Has the disadvantage that it doesn’t draw the reader’s imagintion to her legs (and all the goodies associated with a woman’s legs) but sends the same message. She’s trying. =)

  3. stephaniesubmits
    August 26, 2016

    So, I’m embarrassed to say, but I had to consult Urban Dictionary for “CFM.” Must be a phrase used more by guys. Like “DSL.” Had to ask my husband about that one. Haha :)

    • willcrimson
      August 29, 2016

      Did your husband know? Or did you both consult the Urban Dictionary? Inquiring minds, you know…

  4. stephaniesubmits
    August 30, 2016

    As for DSL, yes, he knew that one for sure(!) And CFM he was like “Um, I don’t know…something-fuck-me?” He said he’s out of touch with a lot of the new acronyms (ya’ know, because he’s “old”).

    • willcrimson
      August 30, 2016

      //As for DSL, yes, he knew that one for sure(!)//


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