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Knowing Better

An adaptation from elsewhere, but yeah, it’s new. – Raz

Knowing better


She knows better
           than to tease in public.
But going commando
           on a warm summer day
She has to tell me
           just a little whisper
She has to show me
           just a little peek
She knows better
           that I don’t care
anyone else
           knowing or seeing.
After her little show
           I show her
and any lucky looker
           a glimpse isn't enough.
I know she thinks about
           stopping me
but at my first touch
           she's flooding.

About Monocle

I am the little devil on your shoulder, stroking your neck with my tail, whispering obscenities into your ear, and looking down your blouse. One third of The Erotic Writer blog.

4 comments on “Knowing Better

  1. stephaniesubmits
    August 3, 2016

    Raz, you have such an amazing ability to craft the most beautiful scenes in just a few words. I love this! As always, thank you for sharing :)

    • Monocle
      August 4, 2016

      Thanks very much, Stephanie!

  2. Brian Smith
    August 4, 2016

    Nice–it’s great having both you and Will back here regularily

    • Monocle
      August 4, 2016

      I hope so, Brian!

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