tumblr_kslsoerirt1qzoaedo1_500-bwI’ve come home. I’m a mess. My hands are dark with grit. I’ve been on a roof. I’ve wiped sweat out of my eyes and dirt’s in my smile lines. You complain my lips taste like road-tar. I get ahead myself. I hear you in the shower. I imagine you, naked, clean, slender. I shed my clothes climbing the stairs. By the time I’m at the top, my cock’s upright, like a satyr’s. I burst into your late summer freshet—cock bouncing. First you’re startled seeing me. Then you’re startled seeing my cock. You don’t know what to do. One hand fumbles with soap, the other with the washcloth. But I’m already planting my feet. I’m turning you, pulling your ass back, pushing your shoulders forward. Then your hands, soap and washcloth, are high against the tile. Then you’re heels lift. I thickly rise inside you. I wonder what it must be like: a woman’s soft core filled by a man’s rigidity. And then the thrusts. You balance on your toes and your fingers climb the tile. It’s too much. Your little cry. The heavy glue of spunk filling your womb. But here’s the confession: When I turn you and kiss you, biting your lip, holding your hair at the back of the neck, cock half-tumid, balls low with the burn of release, I piss—piss and semen—like a satisfied bull. Up and inside you, my semen, and between your ankles, little girl, my streaming piss. I can’t explain it. I pinch your tit. I spank your ass. Twist. Bite your lip. I’m never more satisfied.

William Crimson
September 1, 2015

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  1. vanillamom says:

    Holy hell Will… you’re on one intense roll lately. .. and I like it. Dark and dirty and erotic. . A more lovely surprise i cannot imagine.

  2. Lir says:

    This one I really quite liked xD

    • willcrimson says:

      Thankyou. :-) Just when I was having crisis of self-confidence and literary self-worth. Was reading Mourning Sun by Malin James and Flesh Composed of Suns by Remittance Girl. Serious erotica — and here I am writing about Queens of the Moon, Tentacles and quickies in the shower. They get so many comments. Their erotica touches readers in a way that mine doesn’t, I think.

      But this is a good thing. This is why I liked writing with Monocle and Ximena when they were still writing. I need to admire other writers, feel competitive because of it, and learn from them.

    • willcrimson says:

      By the way, can I ask what you liked about it?

  3. Bluespoken says:

    Will, I just want you to know that you’ve always been my absolute favorite erotica writer. I can’t get into Ximena’s work, never been able to finish anything by Remittance Girl, but yours is passionate, raw and powerful, and leaves me breathless and squirming. Don’t ever think it isn’t good enough!

    • willcrimson says:

      Thank you, Bluespoken. I know RG and Ximena are the favorites of many readers, and deserve to be. :-)

    • vanillamom says:

      Don’t sell yourself short my friend. ..x and rg are greasy writers. . But there is only one you. And your writing speaks erotica in a voice that resonates with this reader.

  4. vanillamom says:

    Not not Not greasy writers. .omfg! Fucking auto correct! Great. They are both great writers too. ..slinking away And hiding my naughty fingers for the nonce…..

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