川柳 · just the same

川柳
an erotic senryu by William Crimson

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redridinghood

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behind her
again — her pony tail swings with her hips just the same
············jogging

  • an alternate version

behind
her again — her pony tail swings just the same
············jogging

  • or this (I like them each)

jogging —
her pony tail and hips swinging
············together

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Latest Comments

  1. vanillamom says:

    I’m late to read…does that earn me a spanking?

    *grins*

    This was sweet.

    nilla

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