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川柳 · sunbathing

an erotic haiku by William Crimson


sunbathing — the girl’s hips and breasts as white
··············as snow





9 comments on “川柳 · sunbathing

  1. vanillamom
    August 27, 2013

    sand. in hair. bad. ugh. nilla hates sand. hates hates hates sand. sand behind knees *shudder*…between *toes*..eww…

    nilla does, however. love your haiku…

    (and where is nilla going on vacation you ask. yeah. there. the *sand* place.)

    • willcrimson
      August 27, 2013

      What? You don’t like oily, greasy. pasty suntan lotion smeared all over you like glops of mayonnaise just so the sand can really, really… really… stick to you with that extra, sticky stickiness that not even an asteroid-driven tsunami could wash off?

      I just don’t understand…

  2. paul1510
    August 28, 2013

    very expressive.
    I agree with nilla, sand can be really irritating, under certain circumstances.

    • vanillamom
      August 28, 2013

      Paul…sand is irritating under *every* circumstance!! :)


  3. vanillamom
    August 28, 2013


  4. exxiex
    August 28, 2013

    Lovely as your posts always are! exxie

    • willcrimson
      August 28, 2013

      I’m glad you’re liking these Exxiex. How are your own haiku/senryu pursuits going?

  5. M.Penny
    September 1, 2013

    Well this certainly puts a different spin on the idea of tanlines. I have worked many outdoor summer jobs in the past and used to hate the stark contrast between my browned exposed skin and my very pale covered portions. With this poem, you made me appreciate that contrast a little more. Thank you!

    • willcrimson
      September 1, 2013

      You’re welcome, Penny. :-) Everything about a woman can be distractingly erotic. It’s really up to her. There are tan lines, white hips and breasts, that make my mouth water. But then I was also, maybe, playing on the idea of “white as snow” as being pure/or purity. :-)

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