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川柳 · August

川柳
an erotic haiku by William Crimson


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3626410597_2a0d743974_oaugust —
the hay also still sticking between
··············her thighs

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  • I had originally called this “itch”, but after a bite to eat, I decided that was implied. August makes it more universal and more connected to nature — more haiku-like.

3 comments on “川柳 · August

  1. penelope lake
    August 25, 2013

    This is nice. Beautiful image and the title is perfect.

    • willcrimson
      August 25, 2013

      Thanks Penelope. There was a secondary sense that I tried to play on — the idea of the wheatgerm, and by implication the endosperm, also sticking to her thighs — and from that the idea that all of August has made love to her. I tried different versions of this but couldn’t pull it off without its seeming forced. Hopefully a little of that suggestion is still there. I might revisit this.

  2. paul1510
    August 25, 2013

    Will,
    oh, the joys of the outdoors.
    Paul.

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