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川柳 · hiking

an erotic senryu by Redbud



her sneakers —
the torn gold foil of his condom in the leaves



9 comments on “川柳 · hiking

  1. wordsmithingimp
    August 18, 2013

    Skyn users? :P

    • willcrimson
      August 18, 2013

      Yeah. =) I guess so! I saw the wrapper at the base of a tree along a trail. It inspired the senryu. I have in mind to write another version of this.

  2. Mzcue
    August 18, 2013

    I love the spareness of it. It’s like a hastily snapped photo, which captures reality’s empty wrappers with the same accuracy as its gems. That breathless post coital moment, that glimpse. It feels so lifelike.

    • willcrimson
      August 18, 2013

      Wow! I’m going to hire you to write my press releases when I’m famous. :-) …someday. Emphasis on “some”.

  3. paul1510
    August 18, 2013

    I’m beginning to love these, an entire picture with so few strokes.

    • willcrimson
      August 18, 2013

      Persuading you to love this form is becoming one of my lifetime goals. :-) You’re one of my favorite readers.

  4. exxiex
    August 18, 2013

    This is amazing..sparse yet sensual and wildy erotic in my opinion..c

  5. myrosegarden84
    August 19, 2013

    An erotic snapshot.
    I like it.


  6. Jane R. McKay
    August 19, 2013

    Wow, I like this idea! Gorgeous! xo

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