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Fit of Fingers

Fit of fingers

Talking to Father-in-Law,
————————arm around her waist,
I fit my fingers on her hip,
————————over the bruises from last night.
She doesn’t even wince.

About Monocle

I am the little devil on your shoulder, stroking your neck with my tail, whispering obscenities into your ear, and looking down your blouse. One third of The Erotic Writer blog.

4 comments on “Fit of Fingers

  1. paul1510
    March 16, 2013

    ‘a picture is worth a thousand words’, but in this case twenty-five words paints an entire picture.

    • Monocle
      March 16, 2013

      Thank you, Paul. This was originally a “1-Tweet story,” but I think it works as well or better this way, and asked for an Illustration.

  2. vanillamom
    March 16, 2013

    This is so well done. An entire story in a tweet. Bravo!!

  3. kimber
    April 9, 2013

    Extreme flash fiction? Is that its own category? In any event, awesomely done.

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