川柳 • wet spot

川柳 • wet spot
an erotic Senryu by Redbud
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wet
spot — somehow always on
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Senryu means humorous poem. The senryu, historically, was treated by the Japanese as a humorous, ironic and gently satiric version of the haiku – treating of humanity rather than nature. More stories to come and erotic senryu for the time in between.

7 comments on “川柳 • wet spot”

paul1510
February 19, 2013

Will,
oh yes, been there indeed!
Paul.

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Mzcue
February 19, 2013

Strange how most erotica seems to overlook the wet spot. Much like it does the giggling and the earthy, suction sounds—even the need for potty breaks—that are all inevitably a part of sex.

Sex without grins, and wet spots, forfeits intimacy, I think.

Thank you, Will.

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- willcrimson
  February 19, 2013
  
  You know, right after I wrote this I was thinking to myself: Why haven’t I written an erotic story about the wet spot!?! I think wet spots are sexy as all get-out.
April
February 19, 2013

Ah, the wet spot. Mmm, every time I wash the sheets and see those spots that remain after lovemaking…..

This fills my head with fond memories of many wet spots. :)
April

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allcwrote
June 30, 2014

You have a way with words whether short writes or longer ones.. I am in the process of reading your new story or new on the blog anyway.. But your words are always dynamic and they capture my attention! Cc

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- willcrimson
  July 1, 2014
  
  Thanks Allc, welcome to the blog. I’m sorry there’s not newer stuff, but this summer is a roller coaster!
- allcwrote
  July 1, 2014
  
  you are more than welcome..I am formerly exxieluna and we have replied back and forth before and I love you guys’ blog..I am finally getting mine underway..it is called Pensuality I am using it to showcase my erotic and some not so erotic writing s etc..

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This entry was posted on February 19, 2013 by willcrimson in Haiku, RedBud, Senryu and tagged Erotic Haiku, Erotic Poetry, Erotic Senryu, Erotica by Redbud, Erotica by William Crimson, Haiku Erotica, Senryu, The Erotica Writer.

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