川柳 • winter lovemaking
an erotic senryu by Redbud
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her
ice-cold nose — but only feeling the warmth
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Will,
a bit minimalist for me.
That’s okay. It’s an acquired taste — a bit like Sushi, I suppose, or cognac.
The form demands a different way of reading and really depends on the reader bringing themselves into it. There are some really nice, modern, collections of Erotic Haiku/Senryu. Knowing a bit about the poetic form can help but, again, they’re not for everyone. The rules of the form are easy to learn but, like the game of GO, mastering the form can take years. There aren’t many who do it well.
smiling…earthy…so warm a poem for such chill imagery.
nilla