川柳 • winter lovemaking

川柳 • winter lovemaking
an erotic senryu by Redbud

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her
ice-cold nose — but only feeling the warmth
·······inside her

Latest Comments

  1. paul1510 says:

    Will,
    a bit minimalist for me.

    • willcrimson says:

      That’s okay. It’s an acquired taste — a bit like Sushi, I suppose, or cognac.

      The form demands a different way of reading and really depends on the reader bringing themselves into it. There are some really nice, modern, collections of Erotic Haiku/Senryu. Knowing a bit about the poetic form can help but, again, they’re not for everyone. The rules of the form are easy to learn but, like the game of GO, mastering the form can take years. There aren’t many who do it well.

  2. vanillamom says:

    smiling…earthy…so warm a poem for such chill imagery.

    nilla

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