····womb is still
····of his orgasm, when
····why he can’t
····they have spread and opened
Categories: One Sentence Sex, RedBud
:-) I wrote that with you in mind.
You have a most wonderful way of slipping into a woman’s mind and sheltered corners.
you are on a roll, great!
Beautiful…I wondered how you know these things? It’s not the first time I’ve read your work and wondered that.
I think, as men and women, we share much more than we realize or are willing to admit. :-)
Enough said i think.. !
Lovely words…paired with a lovely image. I can easily identify with this piece. There are times, indeed, when I wish he could see my “wings”…but he must simply be appeased with the glow and the satisfied smile on my face. Likewise, I’m sure I see only a part of what really happens to him. Words – though important to communication – do not convey well that which cannot be seen. It is the poet’s job to attempt it – and you have done that beautifully, and succinctly, here.
Lovely! I appreciate the picture that this brings to mind. It makes me smile