Here?
she asks
again,
afraid to be
seen,
as she,
breathless,
obediently
unzips
the back
of her skirt
to his answering,
Here.
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Will,
Very nice and succinct. ;)
See? this is the perfect example of not one word wasted, yet fully evocative…
the use of “obediently” while letting us know that she isn’t comfortable with the idea…and also very turned on…
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
nilla
Thanks guys.
It’s been a while since I’ve been writing these, but I love writing them. And Nilla, give me a minute while I bask in your hyperbole… =)
So few words and yet the relationship and its kinks are laid out beautifully.
Thanks. Have I mentioned: I love your avatar. It’s just — inexplicably sexy.
Thank you back. I like to think that describes who I am as well. I give the impression of “mother hen” to those who don’t know me well. Those who do…they discover I’m anything but that. I like surprising them.