Storm Breaking

These were all separate entries in Microlensing, but thematically work well enough together, with a little word smithing. -M

 

Storm Breaking

Heavy air
laden before storm
I breathe deep

Torrential downpour
tempest days in the making
you break over me.

Fuck in lashing rain
screaming into the thunder
drenched, inside and out.

Your ecstatic face
lightning-Illuminated
electrifies me.

Rain-cleansed, flooded
storm-broken, disheveled
sleep as sky clears.

Latest Comments

  1. Paul says:

    Raz,
    this beautiful, more please.
    Paul.

  2. vanillamom says:

    brilliant…!

    this was a fast-paced peek into someones bedroom window, just as the lightning and rain shudder through the sky…

    and it was so well done.

  3. Mystique says:

    lovely :)

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