These were all separate entries in Microlensing, but thematically work well enough together, with a little word smithing. -M
Storm Breaking
Heavy air
laden before storm
I breathe deep
Torrential downpour
tempest days in the making
you break over me.
Fuck in lashing rain
screaming into the thunder
drenched, inside and out.
Your ecstatic face
lightning-Illuminated
electrifies me.
Rain-cleansed, flooded
storm-broken, disheveled
sleep as sky clears.









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Raz,
this beautiful, more please.
Paul.
brilliant…!
this was a fast-paced peek into someones bedroom window, just as the lightning and rain shudder through the sky…
and it was so well done.
lovely :)