Storm Breaking

These were all separate entries in Microlensing, but thematically work well enough together, with a little word smithing. -M


Storm Breaking

Heavy air
laden before storm
I breathe deep

Torrential downpour
tempest days in the making
you break over me.

Fuck in lashing rain
screaming into the thunder
drenched, inside and out.

Your ecstatic face
electrifies me.

Rain-cleansed, flooded
storm-broken, disheveled
sleep as sky clears.

Latest Comments

  1. Paul says:

    this beautiful, more please.

  2. vanillamom says:


    this was a fast-paced peek into someones bedroom window, just as the lightning and rain shudder through the sky…

    and it was so well done.

  3. Mystique says:

    lovely :)

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