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♥ Inspired by Monocle’s beautiful poem, Blade.  -X

For you
I’m willing to reopen old wounds
Let you lick at me,
eyes glowing,  greedy
Orbs of ancient ice
illuminated by a fierce internal sun

For you
I’m willing to remember old pains
Let you dig deep
in the settled dust and detritus
For skeletons
Painful memories long buried to dull the ache

Dance around these old bones
Wrapped in new flesh
Mark me with your cruel brand of love
Bite through the bitter and into the sweet
Penetrate through the stone and ice
And warm yourself in the fires burning
deep within me
teeth bared in grim triumph


About ximenawrites

I undulate in your vision A strange beauty in a world of plastic, collagen and steel The endearing oddball the living, breathing Picasso that you want to figure out but too afraid to venture into my penumbra you cower at the gate, fingering the knob on the door to my most secret place wishing you could find the courage to walk with me love me, just as I am

5 comments on “Promise

  1. paul1510
    April 11, 2011

    fascinating, but somewhat macabre.

  2. Lady Grinning Soul
    April 12, 2011

    Beautiful, darkly beautiful. I thought Monocle’s poem was inspiring too.. I can still feel it cutting through me. Just, slightly less melodramatically than that. This is such a gorgeous response.

  3. vanillamom
    April 12, 2011


    i know we all live somewhat parallel lives but X…were you reading my mail?


    this is powerful stuff to this subgirl. powerful.

    and i loved it, every word.


  4. Ava
    April 12, 2011

    Ooooo Ximena, lovely, truly lovely.

  5. Mateo de la Rioja
    April 20, 2011

    Powerful imagery. I was particularly drawn by the all the “depth” metaphors.

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