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A Detrin

On a ticket stub to Die Freischutz

My dear, you are beautiful.  You are the loveliest creature in the opera house tonight.  I know something about you – that you would like to be a student at the conservatory this fall and that you possess a voice of astonishing range and maturity.  I also note that you possess astonishing maturity in other areas.  I am a connoisseur not just of opera, my dear, but of these other areas.  You will find me very well connected, generous, and discreet.

To read the updated and edited version of this story, go here. The story will be generally available until published, and then restricted to members of Obsidian Lens.

4 comments on “Pygmalian

  1. Seduced-by-Darkness
    January 10, 2010

    “You are the first,” he answered. “You are my Pygmalion, finally. You crave to be admired, adored, narcissism without conscience.”

    “I am a woman,” she answered with a sly smile. One that he couldn’t see. “It is my right.”

    I adored this story, very perceptive and extremely evocative. Your writing can seduce both the mind and the body, an undeniable gift.

    • willcrimson
      January 10, 2010

      Thanks Seduced – if only I could have written like this in college – when it really mattered. :-)

  2. Peter
    March 14, 2010

    Superb! I loved the images, the decadence, the dialogue, and the vocabulary.

    And it was very, VERY erotic.

    Thank you.

    • willcrimson
      March 14, 2010

      Thanks, Peter. Besides the Daydream series. I’m proudest of Pygmalian. And glad you noticed the vocabulary – had some fun with that.

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