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Blade

April 10, 2011

If you look at a micrograph
or an electron picture
of the sharpest, cleanest metal blade
you’ll see dullness
and jagged-edged teeth.

You’ll know that this knife -
this knife rips when it cuts.

Use the same magnification
the same imaging techniques
on a shard of obsidian glass
you’ll see  smooth lines
and conchoidal-edged crystal.

You’ll know that this blade -
this blade slices, splitting cleanly.

I’ve been cut by glass before
A slit so subtle,
so deep,
I never noticed
until I’d bled almost dry.

But not you.
When you cut me I know it
I feel the rip,
the blood torn out of me.
To stanch or let flow as I
as we
see fit.
And I know you -
You are my steel blade.

For you, I’ll bare my chest.
For you, I’ll show my neck.

Blade the May-June Gallery selection at The Erotic Readers and Writers Association.

Also tweeted for #wankwedensday 5/18/11

13 Comments leave one →
  1. paul1510 permalink
    April 11, 2011 4:19 am

    Monocle, and this from a man who is not a poet. :D
    Liar!!!
    Great! :)

  2. April 11, 2011 4:21 am

    nice!

  3. Ava permalink
    April 11, 2011 4:20 pm

    Dear god, did I die and go to poet’s heaven? Brilliant piece my friend, absolutely brilliant. Never expected that twist. Well done.

  4. Monocle permalink*
    April 11, 2011 6:41 pm

    Thank you all very much. (I still don’t feel like a poet – I wish I understood the whys and wherefores of that)

  5. Squeaky permalink
    April 12, 2011 1:54 am

    So very close to the bone.
    So very, very close.
    Poet you are.

  6. April 12, 2011 4:33 am

    This is magnificent; powerful. I love every word.

  7. vanillamom permalink
    April 12, 2011 12:09 pm

    the truth of that trust cuts close, my friend.

    *smiling*

    bravo!

    nilla

  8. May 18, 2011 9:37 am

    Arresting imagery. Great poem.

  9. May 18, 2011 11:24 am

    From critical analysis to raw emotions…beautifully done

    Mollyxxx

  10. May 19, 2011 8:50 am

    Blades are so seductive, especially combined with this willing submission to them. Very nice piece!

  11. May 19, 2011 7:50 pm

    Truly enjoyed your work – I love it when poetry touches the things I love best

  12. Monocle permalink*
    May 19, 2011 8:23 pm

    I can’t thank you all enough. I really appreciate your kind words, and glad the piece spoke to different people in different ways.

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