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February 23, 2011

This is my contribution to Ruby Kiddell‘s #wankwednesday, a twitterotica project that invites short, hot flashes of fiction shared 140 characters at a time. Find it on Twitter, or at Ruby’s blog, and next week, why not join in? This week’s cue makes the title of this piece.-M

“What are you doing?” Tammy asked, breath like a coiled spring.

“I’m feeling myself inside you,” I replied, pressing my palm gently just above Tammy’s mound, my other hand riding the curve of her hip up and down.

“Can you really do that?” she asked, bringing her hand to mine.

She rocked gently astride me, grinding her impaled cunt against the root of my cock. My eyes were half closed, lips quirked in some kind of smile as I moved my palm in little searching circles.

“No… maybe. I imagine it. I- oh!. I felt that.”

Tammy squeezed me rhythmically inside, making me see stars.

“That’s Ok, then,” she said.

“I’m sorry. It’s more than fucking. It’s being inside. Inside you. I can’t explain it. It’s the hottest thing- I just wanted to feel it every way possible.”

Tammy leaned forward, sliding her hands up my chest to my neck, and cheeks, and temples. She pressed her palms against the sides of my head and pressed, just like I was doing to her belly.

“Mmmm. I know exactly what you mean.”

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As of this writing, the other contributors to this week’s Wank Wednesday are:

  1. Angels Breath’s Spring
  2. #Spring (Aisling Weaver)
  3. The Spring in the Night (Remittance Girl)
  4. #Spring – Lady Grinning Soul
  5. #spring by Wyeth Bailey @ DangerousSweets
  6. Repressed soul //Shan
  7. #wankwednesday (Jelly)
  8. Spring by Lilith Katz
  9. Spring by D. J. Rixell
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7 Comments leave one →
  1. February 23, 2011 7:31 pm

    I really really really like this…. so so much. Mmmm… makes me crave him.

    Thanks for linking me.

  2. February 23, 2011 8:29 pm

    Superb post…do you construct on the fly? an intriguing format for a snapshot story…short, but erotic…nicely full-circled, too!

    bravo, Monocle!

    nilla (snow)

    • Monocle permalink*
      February 23, 2011 9:15 pm

      Nilla! New Id? Thank you very much.
      These little flashes are sometimes on the fly – thought I rarely compose tweet by tweet. Usually I write them and then parse them out. It works any way you like, though.

  3. February 24, 2011 11:32 am

    I loved this, Monocle. This has some depth to it. Inspiring.

  4. February 28, 2011 10:49 pm

    Is it strange that I found this really sweet? I especially like this line:
    “No… maybe. I imagine it. I- oh!. I felt that.”
    It just made it more… real somehow.

    • Monocle permalink*
      February 28, 2011 11:17 pm

      Nope. It’s not strange at al, to me. I also thought it kinda sweet in its way. Thanks, jenin.

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