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Dizzy

February 14, 2011

SonicErotica laid out a challenge for Valentine’s day, to make smut, not love. I enjoyed and agreed with the spirit of it and took up the call, hence some valntines day smut. -M

“I’m dizzy,” she said, acting more tipsy than her one glass of Cabernet warranted.

She leaned  heavily on me as I opened the apartment door with her keys.

“Then let’s get you lying down,” I said, looking for a likely place to do that.

Her small living room had a couch. Good enough.

“I’m hot,” she said, pulling ineffectively at her tight sweater.

“Then let’s get you some air,” I said, not caring about clichés as clothing peeled away, revealing skin I wanted to devour. In bra and panties she looked up at me with darkened eyes.

“I’m empty,” she said.

My reply to that contained no words at all.

4 Comments leave one →
  1. paul1510 permalink
    February 14, 2011 8:52 am

    Monocle, :P sometimes words are entirely unnecessary. :

  2. February 14, 2011 8:56 am

    Oh … the way you do, Raz …

  3. February 14, 2011 9:50 am

    Delightful!!!

    nilla

  4. Anonymous permalink
    February 16, 2011 6:31 am

    *applause*
    I looooooove that last line from the female there.
    Beautiful use of quick wit there, awesome <3

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